About the Butterflies

To be honest, I don't think the literary analysis "About the Butterflies" was such an extremely good analysis. It's good yes, but there are still some important things the writer could improve.
First of all i think the author could be a little more informative in her intro. He/she only gives info about the short story itself, but not what he/she is going to talk about at all. It helps to give the reader a little hint of what the whole point of the analysis is. What is it you want to explain to us about the short story? Is it racial issues, or sheep, or maybe even cabbage farmers? Personally i felt kind of thrown into the whole thing without knowing what i was going to meet. However, the arguments the author of the analysis came up with in the analysis were very good. He/she finds the key parts of the story and helps us to understand it. Though at some points there could have been a little more detail.
Secondly, even though the author seemed to have a very good vocabulary, at some parts it felt like the explanations came to some abrupt stops, and ruined the flow of the text. And the transitions between paragraphs were sometimes confusing. But generally the language was really good, and it was easy to read.
All in all though, the analysis was good because: The the writer of the analysis really grabbed on to the essence of the story and managed to tell us in a good, straight forward manner, he/she also generally had good language and his/her vocabulary was broad. But like everyone else he/she has some things to work on.